I Miss The Village
I Miss The Village
By kechi kenyatta / expired giant
Sun 04 Dec, 2016 12:18:59 EAT
10294 Views |
37 Comments |
79 Likes
#nostilagia #reality #change in geographical place
I Miss The Village
I miss the village
Where children play naked and there is no big deal
Where children are sent to fetch water from the river
Where children play with polythene papers wrapped together in the name of a ball
The village in which everybody is ones friend
I miss the village
The village in which people borrow each other everything
Yeah everything inclusive of the common salt
The village in which there is only one television in the area
Where people crowd in the place as if it is a common room
I miss the village
The village in which there are quarrels each new dawn
But at dusk those who quarrels meet and laugh together again
The village in which disputes are settled by the village elders
The village in which there is shading of blood to appease the dead
I miss the village
The village in which at dusk children surround the grandparents
The village in which fire is lit at dusk
Yeah at dusk to commence story telling
The village in which children sleep with there grandparents
I miss the village
Where village elders are the priests
The village in which there are no churches but shrines
Lastly I miss the village life where sharing of clothes was a norm
I miss walking to school barefooted
I miss communicating in my mother tongue
Now I'm in town where children are always in diapers
In town where children play with toys
In town where each person sees the other as a stranger
I'm in a place where children are driven to school
I'm in town where grandparents no Longer exists
A place where water is available in the house
A place where there are no rivers to fetch waters
A place where there are no good neighbours at all
A place where each new person is another's worst enemy
I'm in town where there are no cattles to graze
A place where no food is grown but bought
A place where you can't have anything unless you have money
I miss the village and it's all environment
Does this poem Deserve a thumbs up?
Yes
Prev : I Won't Marry A Virgin Next : Rescue Me From Church
Sharing is Caring
Comments
-
Obuntu Oduor Clinton
nyc piece of work... keep it moving
365 wk ago
-
Otaalo John
Great piece my fellow learning friend.
365 wk ago
-
Haron Morrison
A masterpiece of both super skill and pure passion.
365 wk ago
-
Charloo
gudi one and a u in village..
365 wk ago
-
Agatha.n.mumbo
Lovely Kechi...thumbs up
365 wk ago
-
Rapando Jnr
Hey, I miss the village too. Awesomw expression up therw
365 wk ago
-
Perez
What a talent?! Keep it up Kechi.
365 wk ago
-
Perez
What a talent?! Keep it up Kechi.
365 wk ago
-
Kechi
Thanks guys for finding time to pass by I'm humbled
365 wk ago
-
Vivian
Awesome kechi....keep it up
365 wk ago
-
Eliud Korir
Nice one bro...keep the passion going,I like it
365 wk ago
-
Eliud Korir
Nice one bro...keep the passion going,I like it
365 wk ago
-
Sylvia
Wow!!!.. Kudos pal
Miss the village too... Keep the fire burning
365 wk ago
-
Hillary
That is great Kechi ......keep that passion alive .....you have all it needs to give your best
365 wk ago
-
Hillary
That is great Kechi ......keep that passion alive .....you have all it needs to give your best
365 wk ago
-
Hillary
That is great Kechi ......keep that passion alive .....you have all it needs to give your best
365 wk ago
-
Kechi
Thanks guys I'm humbled and thanks for passing by
365 wk ago
-
Anonymus
Keep the fire burning buddy.......... Great piece indeed......... I really miss the village.....
365 wk ago
-
Norbert Ochola
Great indeed... I miss the village too... I hate city life where sewage system is wanting
365 wk ago
-
Kechi
Thanks for your comments guys
365 wk ago
-
Jessa Dinglasa
That's great kechi...think of all the beauty still left around you and be happy
365 wk ago
-
Boygene
just reminded me of the village life. it used to be awesome
365 wk ago
-
Kechi
Thanks boygene and Jessa .dinglasa lemme think and see what makes me happy by considering what is left around
365 wk ago
-
Dismas
Kaboooom i really miss my village
365 wk ago
-
Tracy
the poem is fabulous keep moving
365 wk ago
-
Kechi
Thanks Tracy for passing by
365 wk ago
-
LUMALA
Awesome bro , chinua Achebe started this way , a name will be forgotten but writings won't .
365 wk ago
-
LUMALA
Awesome bro , chinua Achebe started this way , a name will be forgotten but writings won't .
365 wk ago
-
Kechi
Ooooh my thanks pro.lumala
365 wk ago
-
Dopeboy
miss those days too#great work kechi#
364 wk ago
-
Brian Wanga
Bro, woow!!!, you've got talent aisee, nice piece of art
364 wk ago
-
Jeymoh Spotter
Huh! You miss the village? Am already in the village and things are just a mess here,,,,a cow to graze,,,,,,,haha,,,great work Mr Poet,,
364 wk ago
-
Jeymoh Spotter
Huh! You miss the village? Am already in the village and things are just a mess here,,,,a cow to graze,,,,,,,haha,,,great work Mr Poet,,
364 wk ago
-
Artmania
nice one Kechi
364 wk ago
-
Omari..
Village HOla.... haha nyc bro
364 wk ago
-
Kechi
Thanks for your comments guys I'm humbled
364 wk ago
-
Mercy Mulama
Keep up the good work
364 wk ago